That day while looking out of the window..i saw the real SKY…
The sky who is just like us….
Sometimes he be with many stars…
One day..he be with no one..just empty..
There are the times ,when tears are also dropped..
Sometimes he cries loudly, but sometimes he weeps….
And then some njoy his pain but there are some people who blames….
Rain at this hour …why god why …
When he is happy , the dances with the winds..
And His anger always creates scotching heat…
He shows his mood swings with the beautiful shades of colors…
Sometimes with dusk n dawn , sometimes with rainbows and sometimes with.the help of.his bird fellows….
But every night he sleeps in the arms of his love..
the Time when moon comes , Sky Really Glows..
Reblogged this on Jenny’s Photographic Journey and commented:
Hi Harshadar
Thanks for the follow(s) * (+ all the likes likes), as the reason I write is to share.
* (Though my family and close friends say it would be far more entertaining with a video-camera # in “real life”, rather than in cyberspace!)
# By the way, do they still make them in today’s ever-faster changing world..or is it all done with mobile phones?
(get with the times now,”luddite”* c – it should be a smart phone)
* or so I was often called by my “my techno-geek” friend, Bill (“the gonk”)
“total non-techno” c (who doesn’t possess a mobile phone, after a rather eventful’ experience some years back, whilst trying to walk, talk and chew gum at the same time)
Who says men can’t multi-task!
Kind regards and all the best with your blog
“early bird” (very) * craig
* my “best” time (by far)
“You will do foolish things…but do them with enthusiasm.”
– Colette
PPS
Best wishes from the First City to see the sun (in summer) …and we’re also the first to see the sunset and the stars (in winter-time)
“I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness because it shows me the stars.”
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Beautiful words paint a wonderful vision
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Thanks alot 😁😁
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Thank you for going to my blog and liking 7 of my posts, your poem shows promise, you might want to edit slightly replace the “i” with a capital “I”, also replace “he be” with none at all, just emptiness
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Hey Graham ..thanks for suggestion..will surely correct it😁
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Beautifully written ❤
Thank You for your ‘Follow’ on my Blog 😀
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Hello Patrice…thanks alot for appreciation and stoping by😁😁
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Lovely poem and sentiment. I know how difficult writing in a second language can be. Take any critique or suggestions kindly, but never get frustrated by the technicalities of writing in English. The vision you create and emotions you evoke come through everything else, and that is what is important…especially in poetry.
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Hey Brad….thanks for such kind words and help😁😁…its really useful..
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Like this a lot
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Hey …..Thanks alot for stopping by..means alot😃😃
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Thank you for visiting my blog and ‘likes’ for my posts. I have not identified your first language yet, and so have not been able to respond to your other posts as I would like, but…thank you!
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“And HIS anger always create scotching heat” , great poem and I thought that was a great line.
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Hey charly…thanks alot😁
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It was a good read
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This is beautiful
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Hey kally Thanks alot😁😁
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